Wow. Not good on the reading comprehension, eh? I'm biased towards them as a *result* of all the experiences I've had. I just described some of those experiences. Or are you going to back-pedal and then make some comment about "correlation not being causation"?
Consider the three girls in my machine learning class whose answers were *consistently* superior, and my TA (who was also male) and I both agreed about this. It's not like we just blindly accepted their answers. We always checked them. They were just consistently excellent. We didn't have some a priori assumption that they would be, and of course, it was only three of them. I also knew several of the men in that class already and had hired them to do research because they seriously kicked ass. If anything, I had expected THEM to produce the best work if only because I had seen excellent work from them in the past. Plus, there were lots of girls in this class. It was just three in particular that stood out, and this experience isn't much different from other courses I've taught.
When I was in industry, I didn't think a lot about it. I worked with women, and most were good at their jobs; some weren't, but they did well enough. But when I started teaching and observed that (especially among the undergrads), the performance among the females was distinctively towards the top of the spectrum, I talked to the graduate and undergraduate program directors, and they explained to me the self-selection bias. You can also find this with a little googling. Freshmen in the CS program could be all over the place, with men and women who are anywhere from very good to just terrible. As they progress through the semesters, students learn good study habits, and there's some attrition to other majors and dropping out. Well, more girls leave, and they tend to be the weakest ones.
I don't know. Maybe treating woman with respect as human beings is a good way to motivate them to work hard? I can say that both men and women seemed to try especially hard for me because I was nice to them and became someone they didn't want to disappoint. There have been multiple instances where students and subordinates have performed better for me than others "warned" me they would do. Indeed, there was more than one guy I hired for research whom I was told by the undergrad director was "lazy," but I didn't see it; I gave high-level instructions and answered questions, and then they would come back regularly with excellent work. What can I say? There was this one guy in the machine learning class who's a genius, and he's in a doctoral program at Stanford now. He did almost as well as the girls but was having some senior-itis. His answers were correct and easy to grade, and his code was good. If those three girls had not been there, he probably would have been one of the ones we used as reference. But when questions and coding projects are open-ended, you see a lot of individual variation. Those three girls also wrote code that was better-commented and easier to read.
This does make me wonder. Am I biased towards women because (as I generally believe) I have observed very good school and engineering results from them? Or have I observed good results from women because my bias towards them somehow motivated them to work harder? If it's the latter, why is it that I got the same from the top men I worked with as well? Another option is that I tend to subconsciously assume the best about people, men AND women, and any extra assessment I *think* I need to do about the men isn't something that I necessarily show or do in practice. I honestly don't know. What goes on in my head and what I actually do may be two different things -- whatever it is, I seem to work well with others and inspire them to work hard.
Keep in mind that just because I'm biased towards women doesn't mean I'm biased against men. Don't make this out to be some kind of dichotomy. Of course, the alt-right likes to do that a lot (as do the alt-left -- what is it with these alt people and their polarized ways of thinking?). If anything, I'm biased in favor of the better universities, and I can have a little more confidence that the relatively few women coming out of these institutions know their shit, compared to the men, because performance among the men is more gaussian.
Anyhow, if you're going to make any kind of valid point, you're going to have to work a lot harder. I give your essay a solid C. Your grammar and punctuation are okay at least, but your logic is iffy, mostly because your reading comprehension is so poor.