Let's say that we modify the law so that distribution, or packing for distribution are not covered.
"[Overtime does not apply to] The canning, processing, preserving, freezing, drying, marketing, storing, packing for shipment of [the listed items]
Is that a gramatically correct sentence? The last comma in the list should be replaced with "and" or "or" for it to be valid English.
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