Re:You have to fight.. (Score 1)

"You can use the leviathan forces of attention and enthusiasm that are swirling around Web 2.0 these days as a powerful enabler to make something important and exciting happen in your organization."
This is a fairly typical management-speak sentence but what does this actually mean? The sentence essentially boils down to a simple statement: You can use new technology as an opportunity to improve the operation of your business

No, it doesn't. While I don't much care for word choice in the previous sentence, it certainly expresses more than your summary in some respects and less in others.

The key point of the sentence is that change is made possible because of current technology buzz and excitement surrounding Web 2.0. Your summary doesn't mention attention, excitement or Web 2.0! It loses the key point entirely, and instead makes a different point: That new technologies (in general) can be used to improve business operation.

The original sentence makes no such generalization, nor does it imply that the "important and exciting" thing is related to business operation.

IMHO, your deconstruction is neither summary nor paraphrase, but a different statement entirely.