Re:Does anyone edit these? (Score 1)

Shoulda been:
Denzel Washington (Det. Alonzo Harris) is amazing as a rogue LAPD narc who's turning his new rookie partner Ethan Hawke (Jake Hoyt)...

No, it shouldn't have been. This reads to me like Alonzo's partner is Ethan Hawke, played by Jake Hoyt. Katz's wording is actually better. If you're gong to pick nits, it should brobably read more like this:

• Denzel Washington is amazing as Det. Alonzo Harris, a rogue LAPS narc who is turning his new rookie partner, Jake Hoyt (played by Ethan Hawke) to the dark side.

You can't make it much clearer than that.