Real World Stuff's Journal: Pricegrabber vs. Pricewatch

Interestingly I see under "Related Links" an AD link for OSDN pricegrabber. I clicked the link and NOW i fully understand all th MS box ads. I am sure to click them-repeatedly. Letting MS sponsor /. appeals to my sensibiliies. On another note VA announced a consle for SF...joy, and thier stock stll going down. Layoffs pending, and IBM deal at the approval phase at IBM.

Links to follow.

Several errors

[gnillort]

"all th MS box ads"

"I am sure to click them-repeatedly" - looks as if them-repeatedly is a comppund

"appeals to my sensibiliies"
"On another note VA announced a consle for SF...joy, and thier stock stll going down." - overall poor punctuation, grammar, and spelling
"Layoffs pending, and IBM deal at the approval phase at IBM." - What is this IBM deal you refer to?

All in all, a F. I'm pretty sure you were under the influence when you wrote this. Please rewrite and resubmit.

Re:Several errors

[gmhowell]

He's been alluding to the IBM deal for a little while. I'm a bit curious to see where it leads. I looked at some stuff in Edgar, but found myself in over my head, and not understanding what nuances I should be looking for.