Journal Kragg's Journal: bad fiction 5
I posted a story over at Kuro5hin.
Knowing what the site is like it'll probably last about 5 minutes before being dumped, but if anyone wanted to offer constructive criticism, I'd be grateful...
I posted a story over at Kuro5hin.
Knowing what the site is like it'll probably last about 5 minutes before being dumped, but if anyone wanted to offer constructive criticism, I'd be grateful...
(1) Never draw what you can copy. (2) Never copy what you can trace. (3) Never trace what you can cut out and paste down.
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Incidentally, don't vote it up unless you disagree with the editorial comments, I now think another round of editing and a resubmit would do it some good. But please do leave feedback.
Thanks.
Re:Read only? (Score:2)
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I was honestly interested - I love short fiction stories =)
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I'm going to polish it up a bit and then repost it, hopefully it will get through next time.