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Journal rLobster's Journal: I don't think anyone else is, dearest Nutra, but who gives a 2

...yeah, the title just fit. Any more characters and I'd be done.

Ok, the theme of today is: phantasm. I will own the phantasm. No one else has submitted anything at ALL. Some people may have ideas and stuff, and english classes always have stuff (most of which sucks 'cause it was done for class), but no one will match the volumne of stuff I have. I've never had people read my stuff mainstream, but I sincerly want to know what people think. And if I submit a lot, it's like bludgeoning them into response. Plus, most of it's not that good, so the more stuff, the more chances for positive reaction. SO I'm submitting two mazes, probably about 4 or 5 poems, and one (maybe two) short stories. If there's anything of mine that you liked and wanted to see inthere, lemme know. 'course, as we alreayd established, no one really reads this, but whatever. Hey, lurkers out there, don't worry, this stuff is out in the open. It's here 'cause I'm not good at articulating in speech, I'm better at saying what I mean when I write(which isn't much better anyways). But where was I? Ah yes, phantasm. I was thinking I could sumbit the story version of Strange Happenings in a Deep Dark Forest, to get popular reaction. (for those who dpon't know, SHINDDF is the storyline I'm making into a play for the student directed play. The stage version will be finished by january.) They only thing about puting the story version in pahtasm is that it's 9 pages typed size :(10 i think or 12):

So anyway, other things that you probably care less about, like my person growth and love life. I'm getting better and better into that ideal frame of mind every day. Wow, that was really easy. It used to be hard to say that so bluntly, I used to have to tell my life story in huge metaphors (you know, those prolific periods when I made works like Flame [which everyone seems to love] and Couch). SO yeah, that's me. I know who my ideal person is, and he isn't anyone else 'cause I have my own person goals and dreams and ideal and things like that, and it's a clearer picture every day. Things in my life that I sincerley care about, like careers, school progress and appearece, Rosie, friends and stuff really move me along. If it weren't for Rosie or Music, I would have no real reason to try and be a good person.

ok, enough mushiness. back to cool things. man, if life were all halo, i would be soo set. I'm not the best everyday, but everyday I'm up with the top 8-10(in our little circle). you've got steve and matt^2, chris and mike were floating around there somewhere, and there's all those people that I'm not great friends with like Elliot who are all better than me. yeah, anyways, yeah, bye.
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  • I DONT think you should submitt SHIADDF!!! Definitely not!! Never ever ever!!! It needs to debut as the play! If you submitt it now everyone will know about it ahead of time and it will suck a lot and yeah. Don't submitt it. You need to work on getting in play format and deciding on the ending.....If you really want opinions I would suggest giving it to people to read, individually. LIke, Atwell. Maybe Knific. And, of course, I'll edit. :)
  • Top 8-10? Try top 5! Dont underestimate yourself. Elliot's troupe is severely overrated. You are quite good, mr. widner. you make me proud to have you in my squad

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