Comment Re:Grammar suggestion (Score 1) 310
An adverb should not be placed between the verb it is modifying, and the direct object.
The sentence could be corrected by moving "necessary" after the direct object:
"...a game console that will make their own Linux-based software platform necessary,"
(This assumes the term "correct grammar" is defined as a description of how most native speakers speak, rather than a prescription of rules to make oneself understood.)