Comment Re:Think "Patterns" (Score 1) 196
Sorry for not responding to this faster, but I had to order the book and read it thoroughly. At the time of my previous response I had only read excerpts.
You seem to think that I'm against the 5-paragraph essay. I'm not. The 5-paragraph essay has its uses and teaching concise communication seems appropriate to me. I'm against the 5-paragraph essay as a writing PRODUCT. The end result of writing (IMO) should be communication; not 5 paragraphs, not 7 sentences, not a concluding paragraph that says, "in conclusion...", but an actual transmission of thought.
There are over 460,000 words in the English language. My opinion about teaching using only the Ogden Basic English comes from my desire to see people master the skills of communication. And that is what writing is; a skill. If you are learning to golf, you start out with only 3 clubs in your bag. After you learn the basics you expand your quantity of tools. The same is true of learning martial arts (limited basics called kihon), tennis, watercolor painting, and many other skills.
I like the idea of using E-Prime later on, because it forms communication with direct descriptions for the relationships between subject and verb. Once a person can clearly distinguish those relationships, they can move on to creating artful communication. The process of learning a skill is the experience of going from "awkward, awkward, awkward" to "mechanical, mechanical, mechanical", and on to "elegant, elegant, elegant".
So I'm not saying that appropriate experiences should be overlooked. I'm saying that the desired goal is creative and artful output by the doer. Musicians must learn scales and proper body control before they can produce artful music, and writers must learn those equivalent and analogous skills to produce artful writing.