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Journal Mercuria's Journal: CONCLUSION TO CONVERGENCE, part 2

Next panel: Torg and Riff running, side by side, weapons in hand. Background minimal, streaks to indicate motion.
        TORG: But what about Bun-Bun? And Chen?
        RIFF: I don't know how much longer we can expect Oasis to remain stable. I think I've found out a little more about this "Override B-1" she keeps shouting about, and...

Next panel (LARGE): backs of Torg and Riff's heads in lower left corner; rest is filled with scene of battle between Oasis and fully-shown Crab Aylee. This is in the same or at least the same sort of cubicle area Gwynn and Torg were in earlier; there are broken Cooler-bots strewn about as well as desks, cube walls, computers, filing cabinets, et cetera. Legs litter the ground, tendrils snake through the air. No part of Oasis is touching the ground as she executes a typical-Oasis gymnastic feat, sword over her head. Aylee's neck is extended as she attempts to bite down, snapping-turtle fashion, at Oasis' midsection.

Next: Aylee snaps down on thin air with a good onomatopoeic effect as Oasis twists out of the way, successfully hacking savagely at Aylee's exposed neck. This is gory.

Next: a single tendril, hurtling through the air.

Next: Torg, looking extremely distressed.
        TORG: Oasis! Watch out, the tendril will-
Next: Oasis landing gracefully.
        OASIS: Torgy?
Next: the tendril enters Oasis' arm
        OASIS: Huh?
Next: Aylee's fallen body takes up most of the background, the neck wound visable. Oasis collapses into the pool of Aylee's blood. The eye we can see on Aylee glows, as more tendrils fly towards Oasis' fallen form, green blood soaking into her hair.
Next: Torg about to run toward her
        TORG: NO! OASIS!
Next: Riff is restraining Torg
        RIFF: Aylee's not dead yet, we don't know what she might still be capable of-
        TORG: LOOK!

LARGE PANEL: a blur of white surrounds Aylee and Oasis, a quarter circle against the nearby wall and floor: a cocoon.

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CONCLUSION TO CONVERGENCE, part 2

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