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Narrative and Weblogs: the Blognovel
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on Wed Jul 31, 2002 03:09 PM
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Diego writes "A few days ago I started Plan B -- a blognovel as a way of exploring the narrative constraints created by a weblog, and whether it is at all possible to use it as an artistic medium to produce interesting work. It also presents some interesting challenges on the UI side: what kind of navigation to use besides the basic calendar navigation of the blog? How could it be made obvious that it's not intended to replace print or even ebooks? I thought the slashdot community would have a lot useful things to say about all of these issues. I've also put together a short intro page and a FAQ that I think will be useful to start the conversation: What is Plan B? and the
Plan B FAQ."
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Let me save you some effort (Score:5, Funny)
No.
Re:Let me save you some effort (Score:2, Funny)
It's not just 'No.'
It's 'Fuck no' or 'Hell no', depending on your bend.
Re:Let me save you some effort (Score:2)
For a completely unbiased, bipartisan view of US politics I always go to the Bush Impeachment Countdown [salon.com].
However I do protest at the posters transparent attempt to increase their position in the rankings page [salon.com] by using the sladshdot effect.
Blogs are for stupid surveys. (Score:2)
Very similar concept to Memento (Score:4, Interesting)
Link to "Memento" the novella and comments (Score:2)
I've sold fiction and non-fiction works. The effort in getting something published that is also suitable for human consumption is much larger than most people realize. Anyone can publish on the web, but, as agents and editors often point out, who's doing the quality control? I don't think that weblogs are suitable for writing or reading compelling fiction. Good writing is hard, and demands endless revisions, rewritings, and editing. Any professional writer knows this. Consumers seldom see the first draft of an article or story.
OneStepFromElysium indicated that Memento might be a good work produced as a blog. I beg to disagree; the novella and the movie are very carefully crafted. I believe a novel COULD BE MADE TO LOOK like a weblog, much like Bram Stoker's Dracula is made to look like a collection of journals, telegrams, and newspaper clippings. The nature of real weblogs may hinder character development, plot development, and narrative.
For comparison, check the original Memento story out, published by Esquire Magazine. [esquire.com] Could something like this have been written as a weblog? Hm... something to think about...
Cheers!
ERe:Very similar concept to Memento (Score:2)
He's naughty, He's nice, and He's coming to save Christmas.
Purpose of a novel (Score:3, Insightful)
So what I'd like to understand is how you think this medium and method will enhance that purpose. Why should access to unfinished work, or continuous feedback from reader of that work, help an author convey what must initally be an internal state or vision?
It's an interesting topic more generally, since by and large (I except computer games) computers haven't really added any new media at all. And while Doom may have scared the shit out me at times, it's clear that the richness of the experience was far behind Shakespeare, or even Lovecraft.
Thanks for starting what could potentially be an interesting discussion.
Re:Purpose of a novel (Score:3, Insightful)
I've tried my hand at a novel before, as my half-shelf of writing books will attest.
Yep, I've got one of those too (just to establish my pseudo-credentials).
It seems to me that the whole reason for a novel, or fiction generally, is to communicate an emotional state to the reader.
Partially. I mean ok, if you graph from far enough away that's true, but that creation of emotional response really needs to be broken down some. Fiction can impart a lesson or moral, can create a sense of location (I'm currently reading Anthony Powell's "Dance to the music of Time" series. 3,000 pages - all you get is an incredibly detailed picture of what inter-bellum Brittan was like. Take that away and you've got a soap-opera) It can craft basic emotion, but honestly if that's all there is, I see no point. Romance novels do that quite well.
To me, fiction is about style. It's not what you say really, it's how it's said. Donald Antrim, Harold Pinter, even Douglas Adams do wonderful things to language. Antrim's a wonderful liar - he shatters his novels in the last 20 pages and you never see it coming. Pinter relies on what's not said, lets you draw your own conclusions - he thinks out his plots and writes around them. Adams was an amazing describer - "His arm muscles moved around each other like volkswagons parking." He made images jump to your imagination. His radio background did that - he had to plant a vivid picture, otherwise Hitch-hiker wouldn't exist.
Continuous feedback, in my mind, should be avoided. You finish the damn thing and then show it to someone. Asking for input chapter by chapter could be confusing. But then again, we're not really talking about a novel here.
Honestly, I'd say go for it and see what happens. If it sucks you'll know what to do differently next time around.
Best of luck.
Triv
Blogging as an art form (Score:3, Interesting)
You're thinking of blogs generally (Score:2)
I don't get it. (Score:3, Insightful)
Re:I don't get it. (Score:2, Interesting)
The only reason i can see that someone would want to have a log of their daily life, is for an auto-biography, which should be left to someone who has been in the public eye quite a bit, and whos private life has been affected by it. Face it, most everyone that does one of these online journals is just not interesting. I even hate the stupid word 'blog' that people use to describe them. Its just a buzz word that stupid people use to sound important, like 'proactive' and 'paradigm.'
I'm fired now, aren't I?
Re:I don't get it. (Score:2)
Face it, most everyone that does one of these online journals is just not interesting. I even hate the stupid word 'blog' that people use to describe them. Its just a buzz word that stupid people use to sound important, like 'proactive' and 'paradigm.'
SAT Question time:
1) 'blogs' are to the 2000's as websites were to:
a) the 1860's
b) 1975
c) the late 90's
d) CoyboyNeal
Remember the Mad Website Rush of the late 90's? Little Timmy gets his own site. Here's a picture of my dog. Here's a picture of my sister. Look at this animated ninja I swiped off my dork friend Johnny's site. Who the fuck cares?
Like it or not, blogs are now in vogue. Anyone who's anyone has one (guess I'm not anyone - I haven't updated my slashdot journal since march). It's just another way to make unimportant people feel important.. Not to mention feel like a part of the 'in' crowd.
The only one I have ever read with any regularity is Alan Cox's diary [linux.org.uk], and that's only cause it was a non-time consuming way to keep up with some of the bleeding-edge kernel stuff without having to get tangled up in the mess that is the linux-kernel list. Even then, it annoys me to read about taking his In laws out for Thai food, for example. Why the hell should I care about his love of Thai food? Yeah, I know "if it annoys you don't read it". Well, I don't any more.
Shayne
Re:I don't get it. (Score:2)
Like it or not, blogs are now in vogue. Anyone who's anyone has one (guess I'm not anyone - I haven't updated my slashdot journal since march).
Huh? "Blogs" were in vogue years ago, and if you think this is some new fangled thing then I'd say that you're a little late to the party.
It's just another way to make unimportant people feel important....Even then, it annoys me to read about taking his In laws out for Thai food, for example. Why the hell should I care about his love of Thai food? Yeah, I know "if it annoys you don't read it". Well, I don't any more.
This just blows me away. Exactly as you alluded to yourself (just as you alluded to the fact that you tried your hand at having a journal through the Slashdot system) if you don't like it, then don't god damn read it. The irony of reading your, and other, posts about "unimportant people trying to feel important", or people with "confidence issues", the only people who have a frothing problem with blogs, websites, whatever, are people with grotesque confidence issues and a serious chip on their shoulders. I've seen these people take jabs at Jamie Zawinski, Joel (on Software), etc: It's a sad envy that these people have people who find their writings interesting. Of all the human traits, raw envy has got to rank as one of the most profounding depressing and deplorable.
okay now people.. this is ridiculous (Score:2)
common complaint: "I'm not interested in anyone else."
Then why do you read slashdot? it's much like a set of interactive blogs... and yes some blogs are indeed interactive... people link back and forth.
Also, though they are a public forum for a person's thoughts, they really aren't intended for a huge growth in traffic... they're a place to keep one's thoughts...
Sure some are for the purpose of artistic expression, but my view of art is that it is mainly for the individual who creates it. Yeah yeah yeah, they're public so others can view it, but most wont... who cares?
Identity is not such a simple concept that a person is the same in every situation.. we all play roles which are different for different people or places. For me, sometimes I have a hard time keeping track of who I am all the time; by having a blog, I can help myself create some continuity... after all, it's just a journal, but one that I can update from anywhere, as long as I'm near a computer with web access.
but as many people have suggested here, I've probably already bored you, because you're not interested in what other people say... so off I go to my own thoughts again...
Re:I don't get it. (Score:2)
And they certainly aren't bad. I enjoy reading through blogs, and it's a great way to keep abreast with someone's life. But imo there's far too much attention given to them as though they are a monstrous achievement. Despite their great following and popularity, they aren't exactly new or revolutionary. Hell
Furthermore IRC chat is imo more "unedited and raw" as far as people's unchecked thoughts and feelings go. It's a place without retribution, thus allowing only conscience to interviene...
Though that is another debate...
My Project (Score:2, Funny)
I found a million and one written in PHP, so I developed mine in JSP and servlets...
I always loved the idea of a weblog. You can take a look at it at http://jspblog.sf.net [sf.net]
Read slashdot at -1 (Score:5, Interesting)
Re:Read slashdot at -1 (Score:2)
The death of the original thought (Score:3, Insightful)
It seems to me that this is similar to other ideas, both that the author recognizes and some that he may not. Dickens, for instance, first published much of his canon in a serial form. Great Expectations, e.g., was first published in pieces (which you can notice if you read it). This aspect of the "new" art form seems to me to be fairly old.
The one "new" aspect may be the "unedited" nature of the medium. The web allows publishing to be cheap enough that few enough people's financial futures are at stake to require that the produced content be of any conceivable literary merit or commercial quality. On the other hand, the radio show of HHGTTG seemed to be done in a manner that may not have had that much time to go back over it. So that's close.
All in all, it's an interesting idea that may bring together old art forms with the new medium, but I wouldn't say it's revolutionary or necessarily that experimental, in the sense of wondering "whether it is at all possible to use it as an artistic medium to produce interesting work." Of course it is. You may be shooting yourself in the foot by not using an editor, though.
Doesn't sound too well thought out. (Score:4, Insightful)
entries are "improvisational," by which I mean that you usually sit down, write it, and post it. There isn't a lot of preparation, hours of editing or things like that. You write it, you post it.
"Preparation" and "hours of editing" are the difference between good writing and bad. Don't be fooled by the medium-- even a good blog entry has lots of thought, preparation, and editing behind it.
Unless you've already sat down and thought about storylines, character development, plotting, and pacing, your story is likely to end up an unreadable, uninteresting mess. Real authors of novels don't just sit down and blurt out whatever comes into their head at any given moment. Don't assume that the immediacy of the blog format will substitute for good preparation and planning.
Re:Doesn't sound too well thought out. (Score:2)
Re:Doesn't sound too well thought out. (Score:3, Insightful)
Not so. Like all art forms there are authors who do in fact just sit down and write, and those who plan meticulously and then re-edit through many drafts before they are ready to "go live". And of course lots of authors somewhere in between these two extremes.
There really are artistic "idiot savants": by all accounts Mozart was like this - essentially a gibbering fool in life but also capable of apparently spontaneously creating some of the most moving and complex music ever written. At the opposite end of the spectrum was Beethoven who also created astounding - and astoundingly beautiful - music yet who sweated over every note and constantly re-wrote and fine-tuned his creations.
Re:Doesn't sound too well thought out. (Score:2, Informative)
If you think this, you are a gibbering fool, and you know nothing about the life of Mozart. There are lots of myths about Mozart; the "idiot savant" myth is merely one of many. Lord knows how they get started; certainly the movie "Amadeus" itself was responsible for fanning the flames of many of the extant myths.
Get your hands on some letters that Mozart wrote. Find a good, well-researched biography; there are lots out there. Most myths are spread by people who don't bother to read accurate histories. You'll see clearly that he certainly was no gibbering fool.
Belloc
Fictional blog community (Score:5, Interesting)
when did the blog... (Score:4, Interesting)
Ok, so I've been surfing since Mosaic 1.0 in 1994, and ftp'ing pr0n for zurich.ai.mit.edu since 1990, and the first time I heard of a 'blog' was a few months ago. The odd thing is, this discussion of blogs came out of the news websites and not the nerd websites.
when the hell did blogs become so famous? and are they just the modern equivalent of
?
Re:when did the blog... (Score:2, Informative)
Re:when did the blog... (Score:2)
By contrast, blogs contain narratives.
the end of writing? (Score:3, Interesting)
These people came of age in the early 80's. They grew up with cartoons, MTV, hair bands and cocaine. They've been disillusioned, become disillusioned with their disillusionment, and are jaded and cynical as a result. With middle age creeping up on them, they have neither the time nor the desire to sit down and read, whether in a library or on a computer screen.
But is this so terrible? I'd propose that, no, it isn't. Look at what has gone before: we've lost great art forms such as traditional oral storytelling, the inscription of heiroglyphics into stone tablets, papyrus scrolls. The printing press upset the wonderful tradition of books copied and illuminated (illustrated) by monks. Yes, it is sad when traditional and familiar art forms fade away, but it also signifies progress.
We're reaching a point where the sheer amount of information available exceeds the expressive power of the book. Flash, DVD, and video games are the media of the future. This attempt to adapt what is essentially a dying and doomed art form to modern tastes is touching, but ultimately doomed to failure. And while we should (and probably will) all look back fondly on the Book Era, we should not shy from our destiny in the Information Age.
We are on the verge of accomplishing great things for Mankind. This is a time like no other previous, and with all probability like none to come. Let us not be distracted by nostalgia and wistful dreams.
Re:the end of writing? (Score:2)
Nice troll. Many of us were born when LSD was in full swing, thank you very much.
interesting concept (Score:2, Interesting)
So basically, you're creating a character who will then tell 'their story' through the blog?
I didn't fully read all the entries, but is the character supposed to be posting on the blog, or is the blog itself just the medium?
Also, I couldn't immediately ascertain this by reading the story, but does time for the character correspond to the time and date on the blog?
I think these would be important things for the audience to be able to figure out quickly, to help them get into the story and get to know the character.
All in all, I think this is a cool concept, and would be interesting alongside traditional fiction, perhaps even movies. E.G. You could be reading a story set in a certain time period about a character or two, and go online and read a character's blog about occurances during that time period to get a better idea about small events that might not advance the plot, but would be otherwise interesting in regards to the development of that character.
i bet a lot of minor characters would have entries complaining that the main character is always in the limelight. =)
Storylines (Score:5, Funny)
You could organize your blog according to topic, and then add entries under each heading:
Would it be "interesting?" I guess that's up to you.Re:Storylines (Score:2)
Wiki as Blog (Score:3, Interesting)
I began using a Wiki for my own site a few weeks ago and I like it a lot better than the chronological format that seems to be the standard for "Blogs"; information becomes contextual and meaningful as crosslinks develop between pages. You don't have the compartmentalization that comes with organization by date and/or category.
As an added experiment in meaningful context, I integrated the top five Google search results as sidebar links for each and every Wiki page on my site... sometimes the links aren't really all that related to the page's topic, but most of the time they're dead on. My next plan is to include the top five referring URLs on each page as well, which should get some interesting feedback happening in combination with Google's links.
How is this news?? (Score:2)
I mean really. Blogging is someone putting a paragraph or 2 (or a dozen) a day, a week, etc into an online journal. They are often trivial. Personally I think thats why people like them. They show that other people involve themselves in the trivial aspects of their own lives as much as the rest of us.
As for a story, go ahead and write one. But the difference between yours, and everyone else who blogs is, theirs might actually be true.
Then again, maybe they are already telling a story, and we don't know it yet.
One possible "artistic" endeavour (Score:2)
Most people think blogs are uninteresting snippets of uninteresting people. Why not invent an interesting person?
useful tool (Score:2)
The blog format is just another potential tool for the literary process. It is thus important to consider the properties of this tool to decide how to use it.
What new capabilites does the blog bring to the table? What new stories does it allow you to tell? What new writer-reader dynamics does it allow? Fiction in the form of journal entries is not a new thing. Done well, it can create a sense of intimacy between the writer and the reader. Long running web comic strips such as Sluggy Freelenace [sluggy.com] show that you can get away with a long running plot in little daily chunks on the web.
At the same time, you have to consider the bad properties of such a tool. As with many serial novels, people may be unlikely to start in the middle, or backtrack years to catch up. Many people tend to find it tiresome or slightly painful to read novel length stretches of text off of a computer screen.
I'd say, if you have a story to tell that fits the form, go ahead. I don't tend to see it as such a breakthrough for literature, just another slight variation in the art of storytelling.
It can work (Score:2)
I hate plot-oriented stories anyway. (Score:2, Funny)
Yeah, I hate it when plot [dictionary.com] gets in the way of a good story [dictionary.com]...
Reminds me of... (Score:2)
I'm not too familiar with blogging, but to set up a blognovel, wouldn't you need to write something where the concept of "what happens next" is unimportant? Can one write an story without chronology? I suppose Naked Lunch [uni-bremen.de] was pretty devoid of a timeline.
Historical citing (Score:2)
Already Interesting blognovel (in progress) (Score:2)
He's left me chomping at the bit for more.
Maybe not a novel... (Score:2)
Here's the most interesting weblog I've ever seen (Score:2)
Some of us might remember The Spot [archive.org] A now defunct weblog that tried to make a go of commercializing this form of entertainment (they failed, they even manage to fail at the pinacle of the dot com craze). And they managed to fail with PICTURES!
I guess the moral of the story is, if you're going to do a weblog, make it something interesting like a clerk at an adult video store or maybe a massage parlor or something where you have a lot of quirky personalities to talk about.
Re:Seems to me... (Score:2, Insightful)
Re:Seems to me... (Score:2)
Um, I think you've managed to state the goals of everthing any person has ever done. So maybe you should quit your job because it only gets you money. Don't post on slashdot so you have no chance of fame (yeah right), and go shoot yourself since you're probably trying to do something useful with your life.
Re:Seems to me... (Score:2)
Re:Grammar (Score:2)
Just because a flash site can be bad, doesn't mean it will be.
Same goes for web logs. Especially since it's intended as a project more than an online diary.
Re:What about Trolls? (Score:2)
I'll second this, that guy (gal, whatever) isn't a troll, he's an author. Regular readers can clearly see the progression of the artists writting style and technique, and the story is darn interesting.
Or at least it was, I haven't checked it out in a few months.